Monday 5 November 2007

Haunted Manor (5)

http://dannyscollege.blogspot.com/2007/11/adventure.htmlThe boy enters a a dark room which the boy can't see a thing. The boy walks in slowly, once he gets in the door slams shut, he jumps round and trys to open it but it is locked. He starts to hear noises like some one else was walking round the room, the boy starts to move further in to the room, starts to feel about some how he find a candle on a table lucky for him he was a smoker, before he lights the candle he starts to smell the hideous stench of urine, then he lights the candle then turns round and see's



1 comment:

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